MoonBeam Feat. Pryce Oliver - Excess (Radio Mix)
Idea 1
Starts off with the close up of the girl’s face, mouthing ‘excess’ with a smile, girl looking rough, make up smudged, drugged up look, wearing boys shirt, then close ups of the mess in the room (broken bottles, glass, mirror, clothes on the floor) a two shot, a mid shot of the boy looking at the girl, sitting next to her, her smiling mouthing another excess with a JD in her hand, goes to drink it, he gets up, different shot, grabs her wrist of the hand holding the bottle, jumps from his eyes to her eyes, then two shot, see the anger & tension as another ‘excess’ comes up. As the music speeds up he throws the bottle, they start kissing ‘passionately’, a flash of her kissing another man, he pushes her off, they shout, he walks out, slams the door as music goes quiet, lyrics start, he starts singing walking down the street/ out of the house, shots of him walking into the bar and drinking shots - intercuts with her getting make up and getting dressed (costume important, she’s wearing a tight dress, with stockings, high heels), - walks out of the bar, she walks out of the house, music speeds up, he sees her chatting to someone, music speeds up, he pulls her in, they argue, they push each other, possible ‘flashbacks’, she walks off/gets into a car, cuts to him slamming the door of his house, smoking a fag, singing, gets his records, cuts to him walking into the club, plays music in the club, sees her, gets off the stage, follows her, drags her home, locks the door, they kiss, a lot of intercuts towards the end of them fighting, kissing, smoking together, drinking together, having fun, as last excess comes on he’s asleep behind her, she mouths excess, winks and walks out the door dressed as usual.
Davide Loi & Pryce Oliver - Radioactive.
Idea 2
The beginning (intro) before singing: Door opens, people come into the house for a party, people greeting, kissing on a cheek, handing over drinks,
Starts singing: a girl walks in, the guy freezes, he looks up and down on her (shots p.o.v.), she walks past him and goes off to their friends, he’s standing still, everyone freezes, he sings (when music builds up), he walks round them, singing,
People come alive and start dancing when music builds up at 1:00, close ups of the dj somewhere in the corner, close ups on people dancig, people drinking, smoking, a shot of the boy looking at the girl from across the room between all of the people (either a two shot or p.o.v.’s) etc
Everything goes dark at 1:45, establishing shot of the room with people, the morning after, few shots of the kitchen/bathroom, people sleeping. Close up on his face, close up on eyes as he wakes up (colourful world), starts singing, sits up looks around the room, close ups on the mess, sees the girl, goes to make a coffee, he comes back girl’s gone
Music speeds up he drops the cup, runs out the door, runs across the streets, shots of him riding the bike, finds himself in some field, running around all lost, sees the girl on her own, sitting down, sits next to her, they talk, he hugs her, smoke cigarettes, song ends.
