0:00 -0:01 – close up on the main character’s eyes opening. First “Excess”
0:01 – 0:07 –establishing shot of the room, close up on a full ashtray, broken bottles, clothes everywhere.
0:07 – 0:08 – second “Excess”, close up on the girlfriend mouthing Excess, blowing out smoke in a white shirt, smudged make up.
0:08 -0:15 –close ups two-shot of the couple sitting next to each other, looking at each other, lovingly.
0:15 -0:16 – third “Excess” extreme close up of them squeezing each other’s hands “in passion”.
0:16 -0:18 – close up on his face, extreme close up zoom in shot on his eye, “wide open”,
0:18 -0:22 –shots of the fight from the night before, close ups on bottles being smashed to pieces, possible slow-motion
0:22 -0:23 –fourth “Excess” they let go of each other’s hands,
0:23 -0:31 –two shot of them leaving the bed/floor in separate directions/ sides, a close up of her face wiping tears away, “evil” smile,
0:31 -0:32 –he leaves, door shuts
0:32 -0:46 – “Oh well, I’ve been trying my best, and now I’ve had some success” – him walking down the streets, singing to the camera, few establishing shots, intercutting with him singing
0:46 – 0:52 – “It’s time to try some excess, a little bit of excess” cuts to the girl pulling on stockings & getting ready to go out, putting make up etc
0:52 -1:03 –“ It’s time to try some excess, a little bit of excess” -him still singing, walking into the club (shot of him walking in from outside), sitting down/ordering a shot.
1:03 -1:18 –shots of her walking out of the flat, walking into the same club, ordering a drink, club full of people, they dance, she meets her friends, he meets his, both dance on the dancefloor. (slowmo?)
1:18-1:22 – “Running around and around like a rollercoaster” – blurry camera, p.o.v., as if the whole club was spinning, drug use/alcohol effect.
1:22 -1:25 – he notices the girl, flirting with some other guy
1:25- 1:30 –“Nothing to lose, so excited as we go faster” he walks over, pushes them apart, starts a fight with the other man.
1:30 -1:47 – they fight, possible slow motion, close ups, on the girl the people, they get kicked out, he’s all beaten up, heading home.
1:47-2:01–music speeds up, girl dances, and flirts with guys intercuts with the guy going back home, blurry camera, shaky (drunk & on drugs), shuts the door,
2:01 -2:03 –close up on her face in the club, looks confused/lost
2:03 -2:10 –she comes back, looks all guilty, he sits on the bed, looks up (close up) – quite long shots, of them looking at each other (her guilty & apologising), him all angry?
2:10 -2:17 – arguments ends in kissing, making up, passionate kissing, he throws her on the bed, etc
2:17-2:18 – darkness/blank shot, symbolising end of the day, end of an old chapter,
2:18 – 2:33- "Oh well, I’ve been trying my best, and now I’ve had some success”, morning after both on the bed, facing each other, looking happy, morning light, bright, cheerful, fresh feel.
2:33 –2:38 –“It’s time to try some excess a little bit of excess” –they have breakfast together across a table, talk, laugh etc (good relationship, happiness, no problems)
2:38 -2:46 –“It’s time to try some excess, a little bit of excess” –he goes out, kisses her goodbye, she sits on a sofa, reading a book, close ups, shot of him walking out the door.
2:46 -2:55 –she throws the book away, puts on the stockings, make up, winks at the camera as “Excess” comes on
2:55 -3:10 –she walks down the street, typing on the phone, walks past him in a café, he’s writing, walks out, follows her, she sees him, they fight, he walks away
3:10 – 3:26 –he goes back to the flat, goes mental, packs a suitcase with her clothes, gets a bottle of Jack, gets drunk, image gets shaky. Excess comes on everything goes black,
3:26 -3:34 – she walks in, he’s on the floor, passed out, her suitcase’s by the door, she takes it, winks at the camera again and leaves. Door shuts. THE END.
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